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Last Saturday，I was on a train during my journey to home．I had reserved a seat，that made me quite relaxing．However，in front of my seat there was a couple travelled with two little kids．Since they had only one seat，there was no space with the man．The weather was also cold．I decide to move a little bit and share my seat with the man so that he could sit down and travel comfortable．The man was very grateful and said thanks to him again and again．There was big smile on his face．
Helping others also brings me happy!

【考點(diǎn)】人與自我．

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