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    A men asked Socrates the secret to success and Socrates asked him walk with him to a river.When in the middle of a river，Socrates ducked him into the water all for a sudden.The man struggled to get out but was failed and started turning blue.On seeing this，Socrates pulled him out of the water but the man took a deep breath of air immediately.Socrates asked that he wanted the most just now，the man reply， "Air." Socrates said， "That's the secret!When you want success as bad as you wanted the air，you will get it.There is no others secret."

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