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注意：
1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I have taken part a voluntary organization recently.It is set up last year to provide left-behind children with birthday gifts.It is hardly for them to receive birthday gifts from their parents why their parents leave home to work in big cities.Besides，our volunteers will make a list of these children's birthday wishes.After read the list，we try our best to get the gifts they really want.Some kids hope for the pair of new shoes or several books as his birthday gifts.I'd like to these kids to receive the very gifts they wish.We sincere hope each one will have a nice birthday.
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