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I'm so exciting and happy to hear that you're coming to China.Since your trip is scheduled for the middle of July，time is not a problem for me because of I will be having my summer vacation at that time.
I've been very busy recently，for I've been preparing for coming exam，that is important for me and my future life.Last week，I attended an English speech contest intend for high school students all over the province and I win first prize.I've always been dreaming of having an opportunity to travel in English speaking countries like your to practise and improve my English.However，I also want to make friend with people from other countries.
I am looking forward to see you.
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